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Thursday, April 30, 2020

writing

Kia Ora readers welcome back to my blog today i did some fantasy writing a bout a princess that disappear at night. I'm going to show you how i did it and what's the purpose of the steps.I hope you like it.

Why do we need to make an word bank? we need to make an word bank  because the word bank help us to recall words that we have previously learned  and make the writing more exiting to read and share.Why do we need to make an planing space? we need to make an planing space so that we can change the words that dosent  make sense and we can also put more exiting words and check if we need to put comma or full stop.

Why do we need to make an story board ideas? we need to make an story board ideas so we can know the character age is he/she a super hero a villain  or a victim,So we can know what he/she looks like,So we can know what characterise them.Why do we need to make an 2 main setting? we need to make 2 main setting so the reader can know where is the place,and the environment that the story takes place in.

Why do we need to make an orientation and complication? we need to make an orientation and complication because the orientation is when you introduce the characters ,It is also the start of the story.We need to make an complication because It makes the story more interesting to the readers and also its a great way to surprise the readers.

Why do we need to make an sequence of events? we need to make an sequence of event because its the important thing when you write a story to make it interesting to the readers.Why do we need to make an resolution we need to make and resolution because the story wont be exiting when the story didn't solve.

Why do we need to make an Language Features?we need to make an language features because it makes the story more exiting and more fun to read and share with friends.


Wednesday, April 29, 2020

Reading

Welcome back to my blog today i did some reading from working at home, I chose to make a alternate ending the title is Unwanted visitors . The name of the author is Allan Bume, I really like the journal because its a great story to share.The sources of the story is to tell that not all the food is allowed  to bring in New Zealand.
I hope you like it!

 Unwanted Visitors 
Alternate Ending 

You’ve been on holiday to Sāmoa. Now you’re back in New Zealand, waiting to go through customs. You’ve filled in a passenger arrival card – and no, nothing to declare. One of the quarantine officers has a sniffer dog, a cute beagle, making its way down the queue. Eventually,  the beagle reaches you. The dog seems interested in the pocket on your backpack, and that’s when you remember ... yesterday’s mango! The parents are really worried that they might not go back to New Zealand because they weren't allowed to bring any food in  the plane like  a mango because there might be flies hiding in the mango.The officer said that they have to throw away the mango because its not allowed to bring mango in the plane and the officer grab the mango and throw it away ,The officer said that you must always check your backpack and luggage if there are and food that are not allowed to bring.The officer said that there allowed to go now and go inside of the plane because the mango is already out,The family is now in the New Zealand.