Kia Ora Readers
Welcome back to my blog. Today here in Hurumanu 4 we were doing a story about heroes and villains. Basically you have to create a story based on a hero and villain. You have to have a hero and a villain. You can have two villains or two heroes or just one it is your choice.
To make a story you need to have this.
Why do you need a orientation ? You need an Orientation so you can introduce your characters and so you can describe the settings to the readers. But what is an Orientation? Orientation is where you can either introduce your character or introduce your setting.
Why do you need a complication? You will have to think of a complication because the complication is often in a form of a obstacle (physical or emotional) that needs to be overcome because it creates a excitement for the reader. But what is a complication? Complication is problem that the hero will try to solve.
Why do you need to make a resolution? You need to make a resolution so you can tell the readers how you solve the problem and it also tie the whole story. But what is a resolution? Resolution is where the hero solves the problem.
That's all you need to make you own story.
Here is my story and I am very proud of it even if it is not the best and there might be some mistakes. I hope you liked it.
Heroes and Villains
That was all a lie
Once upon a time there was a girl named Oceana. She is 21 years old and she lives in New York city,she has long brown hair and to mention she is a vlogger, he has a friend named Kyle. Kyle is good at basketball and he is 22 years old. He has a black hair and he also lives in New York. He is in college with Oceana. Kyle and Oceana were friends since there were kids and their family are also friends.
When Oceana was walking on the street she saw an abandoned building. It was smokey on the outside and very dark on the inside of the building. Oceana thought that the abonned building would be good for the next vlog. She decided to go to the abonned building tomorrow at 2pm. When Oceana got to the abandoned building she shivered and got goosebumps.
She knew it was a bad idea but she still did it. The abandoned building has a lot of cracked windows. “Bang” a brick fell. But when she opened the door she saw drops of blood it was still fresh because it was still reddish. She opened her camera and started to do the vlog. But someone heard her talking. About 8 minutes later she heard footsteps coming up from the stairs. She thought it was just a homeless person that lived in the abandoned house.
She still continued doing the vlog but the footsteps were getting louder. Oceana decided to go home. He calls Mark to pick her up.
Kyle answered the call.
Oceana asked “Can you pick me up here in the abandoned house because I kept hearing loud footsteps?”
“Sure, I'll be there in a minute,” replied Kyle.
Oceana “Thanks see ya!”
“See ya!” Kyle replied.
“Oceana ended the call”
But then the footsteps were getting louder and louder soon and she saw a guy on the stairs. She ran away as fast as she could but the guy was still faster than Oceana.
Oceana was trapped and the guy was getting near. The guy put a handkerchief on Ocean mouth and Ocean fell asleep. The guy carried Oceana and got to the car. The guy drove Oceana to an abandoned house. The trees were waving and it was very smokey and spooky. Mark tied Oceana to a chair. Soon Oceana woke up and got shocked “Gasp” Mark! Why did you kidnap me? But Mark did not answer Ocean.
Kyle went to the abandoned building but Ocean wasn’t there, he saw a paper saying meet me in the abandoned house. Kyle rushed to the abandoned house. He opened the door and saw a bat. He quickly grabbed the bat and he saw four rooms but he didn't know were Oceana were. He opened the second door and he saw no one in the room and he opened the third room and saw Mark and Oceana. He sneaked behind the bookshelf so Mark wouldn't see him.
Kyle stood up and he hitted Mark on the head. Mark passed out and Kyle untied Oceana and they both ran away and they called the police. The police got the abandoned house and they arrested Mark. Mark has to be in jail for the rest of his life for kidnapping Oceana.
“If you thought this was the ending then you're wrong.”
The police went to Oceana's house and told her the shocking news that Mark escaped out of the jail.Oceana was so scared that something bad will happen again like the last time.
“After 4 days”
Oceana “Mark!”
“Don’t yell my name, I just have something to say.”
Oceana”What is it?”
“I am here to apologize for kidnaping you.”
Oceana “You escaped out of the jail for just apologizing.”
“No”
Oceana”Then what?”
“I just got paid to kidnap you.”
Oceana “What do you mean and who is the person that kidnaps me.”
“It's Kyle I know you won't believe me.”
Oceana “But why would he kidnap me.?”
“Because he wants to impress you.”
Oceana “But why would he want to be impressed by me?”
“Because he likes you.”
Oceana “What!?”
“Just be careful!”
“I have to go now, the police are looking for me.”
Oceana decided to go to Kyle's house to find out if Mark is lying.
Oceana”Hi Kyle!”
“Hi, why did you come to my house?”
Oceana “Just here to check you.
“Ohh ok you can come in if you want.”
Oceana: “ would be lovely.”
Oceana “Uhmmmm”
“Yeah”
Oceana”Do u ummm like me.”
“Yes No”
Oceana “Is that supposed to be a yes or a no.”
“ummmmm Yes.”
Oceana “Ohhh”
Oceana”I’m sorry but I have to go now.”
“Ohh ok cya.”
Oceana was so scared that Mark might be true. Oceana shivered and went home. She thought of what Mark said because it might be true or might be a lie. Little did Oceana know that Kyle was following him the whole time. Kyle heard and saw everything that Oceana said. Kyle
thought of something so he can earn Oceana trust again.
Kyle decided to go to the park with Oceana so he can earn Oceana trust. She called Oceana to go to the park and Oceana said yes. They both went to the park and they also went to the carnival. Oceana started to trust Kyle again and they both hangout to the park every day after school.But when Oceana was following Kyle Oceana heard Kyle planning on kidnapping Oceana.
Oceana rushed to her house and when it was midnight Kyle kidnapped Oceana. After a 1hour Occeana woke up and she surprisingly saw Kyle. She freaked out and she was tied and Oceana can't move because she was tied. When Mark was hiding he heard a scream that sounded like Oceana. She looked at the window and saw Oceanan but she was tied.
He still had the bat in his hand.He opened the door and hitted Kyle on the head and Kyle passed out. They ran away and called the police but when the police arrived they saw Mark and Mark was supposed to be in the jail they arrested Mark. But Oceana explained what happened and the police did not arrest Mark anymore. Instead of Mark being arrested now Kyle is being arrested they put Kyle in jail for 10 years for paying a person to kidnap Oceana.
“10 years later”
Now Oceana and Kyle began to be famous because after college Oceana began to be a model and she began to be famous and Kyle began to be a model when he finished college and he also began to be famous. Many people think that Oceana and Mark are gonna be good couples so many people ship them and keep saying that they should date.
After a year Mark and Oceana joined a collaboration for the model and they fell in love with each other and they started dating. After three years Mark proposed to Oceana at the eiffel tower and Oceana said yes and they got married, after a year they got two kids they were twins the girl got blue eyes and has brown hair and the boy has blue eyes and brown hair two, and they lived happily ever after.
And here is some of the drawing of the settings in my story.
And also here is the characters of the story.
Oceana
Mark
Kyle
Thank you for reading my story. I know its not the best but I put a lot of effort on writing the story and I am very proud of how the story turned out and I hope you liked the story.
