Summer Haiku poem

Hi readers 

This is my new post about Haiku poems if you don't know what poem is. It's a poem but have 575 syllables this is the one i made about summer i hope you like it there's two of them.


1.Strawberry ice cream                               2. We always go to 
Is Delicious in he beach                 The beach My friend love swimming 
    With you family                                  And we eat ice cream.



That's my work I hope you enjoy reading it can you give me some feedback what is more great and why and what should i work on next time.